o....m...g Delightfully Different and awesome!
this is like a movie Well done!
Some people have had issues with the animation and such, after I've read a good bit of reviews. If I could draw even REMOTELY as well as this, I would be extremely pleased with myself. An artist I am not, and I appreciate everyone's ability. Some have said that anime is not lifelike, perhaps they have not seen some of the wonderfully detailed works that have come out in years past. I think of Mayazaki mostly in this example, mainly because he's the only name I know in Anime, but he is far from being the only one that can bring life to his work.
Story was well done, a pacing was a tad slow I thought, but it gives time for emotion and allowing the characters to come through.
I couldn't begin to think how much time you put into this. Keep working and improving.
As a side note, I have to say I'm impressed with how well you take negative criticism, though it doesn't like you've had too much of it to deal with and I've been watching your animations off and on since your speed animation entries some time ago. I've always been quite impressed with your particular approach to recreating motion, I just wish that you would study from life a little more rather than from anime so that you can improve the finer points of your work. Your intention is quite clearly illustrated but it could certainly be drawn more believably. But I'm sure that things like that will come along as you continue to work.
I think one thing that sets you apart from the Newgrounds crowd is your exceptional sound design. You went through great pains to bring the right sounds into the piece and it went a long way in establishing the film's identity. Your mechanical sounds, the clicking and whirring and clacking and tinkering, all came together to give the film authenticity. Quite an extraordinary effort for something like this, I must say. I appreciate this kind of attention to detail and I hope that you keep it up and
That's about sums it up. Your story isn't bad, the art needs work but the animation is splendid, and your sounds are probably the star of the show. Kudos to your voice cast, they really came through for you.
I look forward to your next submission... lol emotional!
lol at the end i was like ""holy shit! That and that was great! an awesome storyline and great editing and production- really a hit! good luck on future projects!